Many years ago John and Michael lived. They were in the same class and were very good friends. It was the end of May, so instead of normal lessons, they were going to the cinema or having school trips. That day they were supposed to go to the museum, to see “very interesting” antique exhibition. As always, they met in Johns house. They were having fun by playing computer games. One of them looked at the clock. They had 5 minutes to get to the school. They knew, that they won’t make it, but they were running as fast as they could. By the time they reached the school, the coach had already started. Everybody was out, so the school building was empty. Boys decided that they would wait for their class in the school. They went into school building. They were surprised that the door was open and nobody was watching them. Michael took the ball out of his cupboard and they went to the gym hall. After half an hour of playing football, the light switched off. - Stay here, I’ll check it out – said Michael and went out of the gym hall. After 15 minutes, Michael was still gone. John started to be worried about him, so he went out. What he saw, scared him to death. He saw Michael situated in the center of a big circle of candles. He was all covered in blood. Michael was dead. In the light of candles, John saw a big black shape. He didn’t want to know, who… what was that. He started running away. He heard a terrifying noise. He knew, that this noise was coming from that creature. He was running as fast as he could. He reached the door, but the door was locked. He was in panic. He tried to escape through the window, but windows were locked too. He looked outside through the window. Outside was dark and there was a storm too. He turned around and in the light of thunder, he saw this “thing”. It was standing a few meters of him with its face turned to him. He was scared. He knew, that he won’t escape. His legs and hands were shaking. “There’s always hope” – he said to himself. Finally he made himself to run. He went to a toilet and rang the police. But there was no signal. The boy opened door and run out. He collided with something and fell on the floor. He heard a low whisper: “Nobody’s gonna hear your scream”. Something hit him in the head and he fainted. When he woke up, he saw Michael’s body situated right next to him. He saw this creature standing in front of him with a big knife in its hand. The monster hit him with this knife a few times, till John was dead. When the police found bodies, the monster had already gone…
It has not... but this is what (in my opinion) the spooky story is about... it has to make people scared... i don't think the happy ending would be a good idea... :-) but that's only my opinion ;p
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OdpowiedzUsuńThis is my story... I hope you will enjoy it :-)
OdpowiedzUsuń“The Monster in the School”
Many years ago John and Michael lived. They were in the same class and were very good friends. It was the end of May, so instead of normal lessons, they were going to the cinema or having school trips.
That day they were supposed to go to the museum, to see “very interesting” antique exhibition. As always, they met in Johns house. They were having fun by playing computer games. One of them looked at the clock. They had 5 minutes to get to the school. They knew, that they won’t make it, but they were running as fast as they could. By the time they reached the school, the coach had already started. Everybody was out, so the school building was empty. Boys decided that they would wait for their class in the school. They went into school building. They were surprised that the door was open and nobody was watching them. Michael took the ball out of his cupboard and they went to the gym hall. After half an hour of playing football, the light switched off.
- Stay here, I’ll check it out – said Michael and went out of the gym hall.
After 15 minutes, Michael was still gone. John started to be worried about him, so he went out. What he saw, scared him to death. He saw Michael situated in the center of a big circle of candles. He was all covered in blood. Michael was dead. In the light of candles, John saw a big black shape. He didn’t want to know, who… what was that. He started running away. He heard a terrifying noise. He knew, that this noise was coming from that creature. He was running as fast as he could. He reached the door, but the door was locked. He was in panic. He tried to escape through the window, but windows were locked too. He looked outside through the window. Outside was dark and there was a storm too. He turned around and in the light of thunder, he saw this “thing”. It was standing a few meters of him with its face turned to him. He was scared. He knew, that he won’t escape. His legs and hands were shaking. “There’s always hope” – he said to himself. Finally he made himself to run. He went to a toilet and rang the police. But there was no signal. The boy opened door and run out. He collided with something and fell on the floor. He heard a low whisper: “Nobody’s gonna hear your scream”. Something hit him in the head and he fainted. When he woke up, he saw Michael’s body situated right next to him. He saw this creature standing in front of him with a big knife in its hand. The monster hit him with this knife a few times, till John was dead. When the police found bodies, the monster had already gone…
shit, ur a little weirdo, there's no happy end here
OdpowiedzUsuńit's a pooky story :-) it does not have to end happy ;p Tomek, write your story too ;-)
OdpowiedzUsuńVery nice;) I hope others will join soon;)Tomek don't use bad words here pls. I know there are worse ones but still...cu soon
OdpowiedzUsuńI think this story has a very happy ending .
OdpowiedzUsuńIt has not... but this is what (in my opinion) the spooky story is about... it has to make people scared... i don't think the happy ending would be a good idea... :-) but that's only my opinion ;p
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